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The checkpoint seems somewhat realistic except for the woman calling the priest a “guy.” I should think that she, having some military or security training, would have been trained to call him a “gentleman.” Think of how a police officer would speak of someone when serving in a semi-formal capacity such as a guard (rather than on the beat in the hood).

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